The earth is in danger of global warming and we are creators of the problem.

(NASA Web Site) Deforestation is responsible for 20-25% of all carbon emissions entering the atmosphere, by the burning and cutting of about 34 million acres of trees each year. Each year the equivalent of 40 or more football fields full of trees are removed and used to generate power for us to use.
The United States is concerned about climate change, In addition, 47 per cent of respondents think global warming is caused primarily by human activity, while 34 per cent believe long term planetary trends are to blame. In 2007, the United Nations Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) released a report which states that global warming has been "very likely" or 90 per cent certain caused by humans burning fossil fuels. The effect of global warming can be seen all over the world with the increased floods, hurricanes, forest fires and melting ice caps.
http://www.ecobridge.org/content/g_cse.html
http://www.angus-reid.com/polls/view/americans_see_global_warming_as_serious_problem/
The United States is concerned about climate change, In addition, 47 per cent of respondents think global warming is caused primarily by human activity, while 34 per cent believe long term planetary trends are to blame. In 2007, the United Nations Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) released a report which states that global warming has been "very likely" or 90 per cent certain caused by humans burning fossil fuels. The effect of global warming can be seen all over the world with the increased floods, hurricanes, forest fires and melting ice caps.

http://www.ecobridge.org/content/g_cse.html
http://www.angus-reid.com/polls/view/americans_see_global_warming_as_serious_problem/
2 comments:
I think that the most of your essay depends on the figures and percentages and this is a good thing so that the readers will have idea about the global warming in figures. Another thing is that you mentioned the most important causes of the global warming. You also wrote the effects of this problem. Finally your essay is too long please try to post a shorter essay next time.
Good luck
First I want to thank you for your organization. Your idea is very clear but the essay is too long. also you have to divide your pagragh.
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